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Fiz está página apenas de estudo de diagramação, enquadramento, etc.

Tam. A3 e finalizado com bico-de-pena

É isso :D
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:iconjasontylerart:
I really enjoy everything that you have done with this panel. Each panels progresses the story in a very natural sense, it flows great. I am not familiar with this content so I do not know if it is original or not but it looks great.

As far as the monster goes on the third panel, he does seem to be a little flat. I think there would be a greater impact if his right hand (the hand on the tree) was more in the background and his left hand (grabbing hand) was closer giving a much more dramatic depth. I think the same thing of his left leg, it seems not quite as dynamic as the right leg and looses some of the menacing impact it could have.

Still, much better then I can do. Your placement of the three characters in the lower right of the panel works great as well.

Awesome job!
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:icondenzelajackson:
DenzelAJackson Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
nice hatching, looks good
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :thanks:
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SOULSSAGA Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Filmographer
E então quando é que a novela Grafica Sai a venda !?

:glomp:

Um otimo ano 2013 para si !!

:party:
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
huahahahaha vixe, eu prefiro nem pensar nisso huahahahaha

obrigado, Feliz 2013 pra vc tbem! :thumbsup: :hug:
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:icondameodessa:
DameOdessa Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:wow: How awesome, my dear! :love:
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe thanks my dear! :D
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:icondameodessa:
DameOdessa Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:glomp:
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:iconenoa79:
Enoa79 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
Beautiful work. Very well done.
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you :)
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:iconenoa79:
Enoa79 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
You're welcome.
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RicardoJost Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wow, que teste O_O, está bem detalhado, tudo muito legal
me mate uma curiosidade, é difícil pegar o jeito para utilizar o bico-de-pena? Quanto tempo você levou usando pra ficar bem adaptado?
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
valeu xará! :D
ah então, não é tão difícil não, vc só precisa tomar alguns cuidados pra não borrar o nanquim
mas não precisa ter medo dele não rs é só ir praticando :D
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AlexandraF2525 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Nossa , deve ter dado um trabalhão pra fazer e finalizar com bico de pena! *.*
Está muito bom mesmo!
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
e como deu viu! huahahahaha
obrigado :D
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:icondarkdragon774:
DarkDragon774 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow... your penwork, as always, is amazing! All that wonderful detail... :)
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you! :D
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:icondrunkengren:
DrunkenGren Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ficou perfeita,tá super caprichada :).Pena que foi apenas para teste,fiquei com um gostinho de quero mais,gostaria de ver o resto... :D
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
huahahaha essa foi só um teste mesmo
mas novas páginas virão :D
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:icondrunkengren:
DrunkenGren Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
q bom :D!Gostei mesmo,estarei esperando pelas outras :)
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe valeu! :D
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:iconandiecris:
AndieCris Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me perdi nos detalhes! Como consegue ser tão detalhista rapaz!!XD

Muito bom!=D
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
huahahahaha olha, deu trabalho viu! huahahaha
hehe obrigado Andréia! :hug:
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:iconwytherwing:
wytherwing Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
awesome work!
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks my friend!
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:iconwytherwing:
wytherwing Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
you're very welcome! :)
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:iconadagadegelo:
adagadegelo Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nossa muito bommm
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:iconricardoafranco:
ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
valeu miguxo! :D
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