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Pagina de teste by ricardoafranco Pagina de teste by ricardoafranco
Fiz está página apenas de estudo de diagramação, enquadramento, etc.

Tam. A3 e finalizado com bico-de-pena

É isso :D
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:iconjasontylerart:
I really enjoy everything that you have done with this panel. Each panels progresses the story in a very natural sense, it flows great. I am not familiar with this content so I do not know if it is original or not but it looks great.

As far as the monster goes on the third panel, he does seem to be a little flat. I think there would be a greater impact if his right hand (the hand on the tree) was more in the background and his left hand (grabbing hand) was closer giving a much more dramatic depth. I think the same thing of his left leg, it seems not quite as dynamic as the right leg and looses some of the menacing impact it could have.

Still, much better then I can do. Your placement of the three characters in the lower right of the panel works great as well.

Awesome job!
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DenzelAJackson Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
nice hatching, looks good
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ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :thanks:
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SOULSSAGA Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Filmographer
E então quando é que a novela Grafica Sai a venda !?

:glomp:

Um otimo ano 2013 para si !!

:party:
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ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
huahahahaha vixe, eu prefiro nem pensar nisso huahahahaha

obrigado, Feliz 2013 pra vc tbem! :thumbsup: :hug:
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:wow: How awesome, my dear! :love:
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ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe thanks my dear! :D
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:glomp:
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Enoa79 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
Beautiful work. Very well done.
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ricardoafranco Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you :)
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Enoa79 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
You're welcome.
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